Long Days and Short Years

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Bringing the Helicopter Mom in for a Landing

From the beginning, I just wanted to do everything right.  Is that too much to ask?

It’s been six years since I hit the ground running.  Two babies in two years, and oh so many things to try and do right.  Natural childbirth.  Organic homemade baby food.  Attachment parenting.  Cloth diapers.   I read books, skimmed websites and listened to family and friends.  Tummy time.  Self-soothing.  Sleep training.  I filtered it all through my own intuition, consulted with my husband, and kept on parenting, one day after the next.

One stage after the next.  Just keep running.

Soon we were out of diapers and into new waters.  Preschool and other childcare options.  Time outs.  How to encourage independence for a child who still might run out into the street at any moment.  How to teach a child to say sorry without that parroting tone.  Playing together and playing alone.  More sleep issues (do they ever end?).  Age-appropriate chores and toys.  Kindergarten.

Just typing this list makes me tired.

Don’t get the wrong idea–I am not a perfectionist.  If you need proof, just look in my car.  But I have labored at parenting.  I have agonized over many small and big decisions.  I have run hard.  And six years into it all, I have one thing to report:

I have often had this gut-level sense that I am blowing it.  Blowing it big time.

Now, most of you are very kind people, and right now you are thinking, “Oh, I’m sure that she’s a very good mother.  She’s probably just being too hard on herself.”  You’re right of course, but this isn’t really the point.  The point is that I’ve got these unspoken standards of ‘doing it right’ that I can’t live up to.  And sometimes they eat away at me.

Wonder if I’m the only one.


I am able to write this post because my children are at summer camp.  They are at summer camp from 9-4, for five days a week, for four weeks.  We have never done anything like this before.

It began on a bit of a whim.  Wide-open summers can be daunting when you have small children, and I had been trying to find more time to write.  When I saw “9-4” on the brochure, I may have drooled a bit.  Then I signed up on the spot.  Four weeks!  Four glorious weeks to write and work and learn and run and read and draw and… “Honey?”  My husband interrupted my reverie.  “What’s the camp like?  What will the girls do there?  How is it organized?”  He must have been shocked at my uncharacteristic response:

“Oh, I don’t know.  I’m sure it will be fine.”

As camp drew nearer, my confidence wavered.  What had I done?  I had no idea what the student to teacher ratio was, no sense of their daily schedule, and no clue if this just wasn’t the biggest mistake of our parenting lives.  On the first day I still wasn’t sure what to think.  It seemed organized, but there were kids everywhere and my goodness it was loud.  The counselors seemed eager, but oh my were they young.  “Welcome to CAMP!” one of them screamed as we arrived.

What could I do?  I dropped off my kids and walked away.

Just.  Walked.  Away.

Seven hours later I grilled them in the car.  What was it like?  What did you do?  Tell me everything.

“Well, Mama.  Once I got lost, but then a tonsilor found me,” my oldest began, not realizing that they are called ‘counselors’ or that her mother had stopped breathing.  “We were going to the girl’s room and I had my eyes closed cause I was making up a dinosaur story in my head and when I opened them my group was gone!”  I sucked in air.  “Oh… really… honey… and what happened then?”  “Oh, a tonsilor found me and walked me upstairs, oh and guess what Mama, we had brownies for snack!”

Brownies are not a very nutritious snack.


There in the car, when I began breathing normally again, I noticed something.  My daughters were buoyant.  Beaming.  Gushing even.    The tale of the missing tonsilors wasn’t the forlorn story of an abandoned child, or even a frightening memory;  it was an adventure tale.  It was as exciting to my daughter as a dinosaur story, and oh-guess-what-Mama, there were even brownies for snack.

The two little girls in my car had had a fabulous day.

With this revelation came, oddly, a sense of freedom.  For the mother who just wanted to do everything right, this day had been a disaster.  I had left them for seven hours with screaming counselors who had lost one of my children and then fed them sugar for snack.  All this, and not only had my precious, fragile children survived–they were thriving.

I had blown it, blown it big time (or so I thought), and my children were thriving.  Amazing.

And surprisingly… freeing.

It’s been two weeks now since that afternoon in the car, and with the benefit of hindsight I can see that things were not nearly as out of control as I supposed.  It seems that my daughter was separated from her group for approximately 2.3 seconds on that first day, and nothing like it has happened since.  The girls love their caring, energetic ‘tonsilors’ and the ‘welcome to CAMP!’ young man is a particular favorite.  There are healthy snacks too, the directors maintain an incredible 8:10 ratio (that’s 8 adults for every 10 kids) in the pool, and the consistent routine has stabilized our summer.

It’s been two weeks, and it hasn’t been perfect, but it has been good.  Good for the girls.  Good for their Mama.

I didn’t expect this, but the best part of camp for me hasn’t been the extra time.  The best part of camp has been a new stage of letting go, a new realization that Just Walking Away is sometimes the best thing you can do.

I’m not talking about apathy here.  We still have our daily grilling in the car, and I still talk with the counselors when I have a concern.  I still prefer smaller groups and more experienced teachers (say, for kindergarten), but this is camp and they are having fun.  They are having so very much fun.

After all, the opposite of apathy isn’t caring for your kids.  The opposite of apathy is agonizing.  And this is where my tendency lies.

Camp, with its accompanying brownies, has been an important corrective.


Bird Funeral

My husband went downstairs first this morning, and I am so glad he did.

The cat was scratching at the back door, so my husband obliged by opening it.  The cat obliged by presenting him with a small gift.

Flutter, flutter, flap.  The gift wasn’t dead yet.

By the time I arrived at the scene of the crime, feathers were strewn along the hallway.  The window was smeared with blood, and the dove rested in the cat’s food dish.  (This last part was my husband’s idea.  He wanted to imprint a ‘you kill it, you eat it’ ethic on our little carnivorous beast.  It didn’t work.)

Our poor innocent adorable pigtailed preschoolers were horrified… oh wait, I mean… thrilled.  Thrilled.  It was the most exciting thing to happen to them since one of our chickens got attacked by a peregrine falcon.

Daddy, can I pick it up?  Daddy, can I have a bag to collect the feathers?  Daddy, can we wake up the boys?  Daddy, can you lift me up so I can see the blood?

(Notice how smart they are… they know which parent will say yes.)

The funeral was led by our five year old daughter.  The eight of us (my family plus our housemates) stood around a small hole and thanked God for making this particular bird.  We said that we were sad that it was dead, and the boys both said that they wished the cat hadn’t killed it  (the cat was not present to express remorse).  Our daughter prayed and we sang her two favorite songs, “You Are my Hiding Place” and “Oh, Freedom.”  Then our four year old gravedigger covered the lost dove with dirt, and the grown-ups turned to walk away.

But we weren’t done yet.

“And now,” my daughter announced, “we will all lay on the ground.”

“Um… why’s that honey?”

“We will all lay on the ground and look up at the birds that are flying.  We need to remember that lots of the birds are still alive.”

We need to remember that lots of birds are still alive.

So we all lay down, all eight of us in a row.  We lay in the grass and looked to the sky.  She was right.  There were a lot of birds up there.

And we remembered.

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A Poem for the Person Who Stole My Purse

You know me better than I know you, and so

I’m writing to say hello.  Did you see

the travel mug

or the plastic elephant

before you covered them with broken glass?

Did you think oh this one’s a mother

as you lifted up the little pink raincoat?


You know me better than I know you, and so

I’m writing to see if you could check my planner for me.

What day was that doctor’s appointment?

And what time does Art Camp start?

I forgot to write in “Visit zone five police station”

and “Get new driver’s license.”

Could you add that in for me?


You know me better than I know you, and so

I’m writing to see what you bought at Wal-mart.

Sixteen hundred dollars is a lot to spend on diapers

or food for your family.

The lady on the phone said that it was probably giftcards–

giftcards resold for cash,

cash to feed an addiction.

Only you can tell me who it was you were feeding.

(For your sake, I hope it was kids.)


You know me better than I know you, and so

I’m writing to tell you that I’d like to forgive you,

but it’s hard.

Hard to forgive a theoretical criminal,

my imaginary enemy, and so

I place you in better hands than mine.

You are not unknown,

even if you’d like to be.

But don’t worry,

being known may be your only hope.